maanantai 25. helmikuuta 2013

The First Time [Naruto, SasuNaru, NC-17]

The First Time by vermilioncream
After being haunted by wet dreams of a certain black haired teme, Naruto is starting to realize he might be attracted to Sasuke. What will happen when you add alcohol into the mix? One-shot. Complete.
Figuring Things out by vermilioncream
Naruto and Sasuke wake up after a night of drunken sex. Will they talk about it, or decide to act like nothing happened between them? Sequel to "The first time". Complete.
It seriously hard to find anything thats worth for reading. Everything just feels like it has been just written without any thought or even putting time to it. It just is there and the writer thinks everyone is gonna love it and when people dont love it the writer goes all angst and stops writing because they think everyone is telling them how they bad people. But at least I found this one. Yea. Two oneshots.

Okey. I have to admit that this one is cliche in the beging. Naruto finds out he is in love with Sasuke and they drink and they fuck. But the fic doesnt end there (well, if you wanna skip the sequel oneshot then it ends there). There is this morning talk where they try to understand each other and make some decisions and how they are gonna survive from all this. So. The end is not so cliche. Its actually good that someone is finally writing the stuff that everyone else just skips and doesnt wanna write if its not seriously long fic where have to be everything. Yea.

And then I seriously fell in love with that morning talk. Like seriously. It was all awkward and crap. It was good and it felt real like that something like would totally happen like that. Well. The fic anyway felt real and how it would all be happening. Okey. Maybe Sasukes all knowning stuff is little bit over but i liked it also cuz its kinda helped everything to move forward and so on.

I have to also admit that there is one version how Naruto got Sasuke back and how Sasuke forgot all about the revenge and can live in Konoha and how everything is just perfect in this little world they are living in. And then there is also everyone finding someone which I also liked. There were told about almost everyones happy endings too, not just Sasuke and Narutos. 

I dont even know if there was a part I didnt like... Maybe there was something seriously small that I forgot the minute I stopped reading. But cant remember right now so I can almost say they didnt excist. Ha. Yea. But what do you think? Was there a something not so good in this one ?