Deal [Harry Potter, NC-17, Harry/Draco, Blaise/Seamus, Ron/Hermione, Harry/Blaise]

Deal by louise4

Chapter Eleven up! Harry Potter and Blaize Zambini are in love. No not with each other! What were you thinking! No, but together they may be able to get what they want. HPDM, BZSF. So this means slash! FINALLY COMPLETE

I havent finished reading this one yet but I have to blog about this one right now because of reasons. I dont have any reasons why but I just feel like I have to do this right now. So Im just gonna say Im sorry about all these grammar mistakes Im gonna make cuz Im pretty drunk and Im writing this one over my phone. But Im still gonna fix all those errors tomorrow or the day after tomorrow when Im gonna open my laptop again. So all the mistakes and crap will be fixed. anyways.

Harry is so in love with Draco but he doesnt know what he should to do to that and he meets Blaise on library and they talk and decides to do something about it. Of course Blaise is in love with Seamus and their plan is also to put those two together. Draco and Harry have this weird fuckbuddy relationship where they arent telling everything and so do Seamus and Blaise. And the plan starts with Blaise and Harry to have a fake relationship so they could make Draco and Seamus jealous.

Okey. I havent read far enough to know what is seriously gonna happen. But I like how unique this one really is. I dont think I have ever read a fic where Harry fakes a relationship with someone just to get together with someone else. On the other hand I have read a lot of fics about how Blaise is trying to make Draco jealouys or how he uses Harry to activate his and Dracos sex life.

But this isnt only a good plot kinda fic. I like how well written this has been so far (okey. right now Im at chapter four or something and I have read last two chapters drunk so yea... but still). There is background stuff with flahsbacks and everything has reasons why they are happening.

Okey. I have to admit that I seriously like Blaise and I would love to read more fics about him and this one is just almost perfect fic for that expect I dont like Blaise/Seamus paring. But there has to be some flaws even in the perfect ones. Yea.

Then every character thinks and makes choices that affects to others and you can see the affect and crap. Everything just felts so good and I seriously cant say any bad thing about this one. Maybe after I have read this from the beging to the end I can say something other than just the good stuff. But still waiting for that.

Good night and I would love to get comments.

Harry Potter and the Children of the Future [Harry Potter, NC-17,Harry/Draco, Ron/ Hermione]

Harry Potter and the Children of the Future by Ahja Reyn

In Harry's 7th year, children from the future suddenly appear at Hogwarts and one of them claims to be Harry's son. Problem is, Harry isn't the only father...DMHP [NO male preg]

I dont hate this fic but i dont like this so much either. The idea is cliche and there are way too many fics with the same script. But the thing I like in this one is all how Harry defeted Voldemort and how much that cost him. Well this one doesnt actually be the fic where all that happened but there are these small details that the kids told the others and those are the part I seriously love. How Harry ended to the hospital and how he had to lose one year of his life and how Draco was suppose to make Harry love him again and all tht.

But the plot is all about how their kids come from the future because Hogwards isnt safe for them anymore at their time and how the kids are messing with Harry Potter characters. The mayor part of the plot is how the kids are trying to put their parents together and how that brings drama every possible way. Yea.

Im not gonna say the plot sucks because you can write awesome fics out of plots that are cliches or some other way shitty but then you have to make the storytelling good and so on. This one has a plot that is way beyond the cliche and way too many new characters. There are just too many objects that are doing something and it gets kinda messy and too complex. Okey. Everything is trying to concetrate on Harry and Dracos relationship but the main idea gets lost in too many twist and how people chances their thoughts and everything is coming out of blue all the time.

Okey. I like the storytelling, its good and I like to read this. I just dont like how the fic become one hell of a mess. There are good scenes and everything has it reasons why it goes this way and not that way. Just then there comes hundrets of happening in one chapter and you kinda lost the plot and whats happening. Plus the things that just happens without any reasons.

This would have been great, even awesom fic if there was one more solid plot or just less characters. But it is what it is. And there are lots of people who seriously likes this fic. So yea. Maybe this is worth to read or maybe not. So please, comment and tell what did you think bout this one.

Tell Me You Love Me [Naruto, NC-17, NaruSasu]

Tell Me You Love Me by HavenCraze

Sometimes actions don't speak louder than words. Sometimes you need to hear someone's feelings to truly believe it. OneShot-NaruSasu-Yaoi

This one is kinda really beautiful even when this has so many cliches. I think part if that beauty is Sasuke being so Sasuke and Naruto being Naruto. Or maybe it is just cuz this is so well written. I dont know but I love this one.

The actual plot is all about cliches after cliches. Sasuke is in love and then Naruto is in love but Sasuke trusts Naruto to read him like an open book and thats where everything wents wrong. Naruto isnt that good at reading Sasuke and they break up. Yea. But this on still gots a happy ending.

Part of this ones beauty is that happy ending. It shows how both of them have to do some sacrifises for their relationship. And all those things make Sasuke to grow a little. And maybe Naruto grows a little bit there too. I think you can see the growing part best at the point where they talk after the break up and understand how they both made all those mistakes just because they didnt really communicate. That also makes the ending even better cuz you got that feeling they are gonna be okey now when they really are talking to each other. Yea. I seriously liked that part of the story.

And then there is this awesome writing style. I dont know how to describle it cuz it feels real and possibly like someone would think just like that. Of course it also felt seriously like Sasuke. Well at least to me it sounded like that. Ha.

But I seriously cant find anything bad about this one even when there are all those cliches how Sasuke doesnt speak about his feelings or how Naruto doesnt speak about important stuff either and how they break up and are just like married couple or something else. This was just so good.