Harry Potter and the Children of the Future [Harry Potter, NC-17,Harry/Draco, Ron/ Hermione]

Harry Potter and the Children of the Future by Ahja Reyn

In Harry's 7th year, children from the future suddenly appear at Hogwarts and one of them claims to be Harry's son. Problem is, Harry isn't the only father...DMHP [NO male preg]

I dont hate this fic but i dont like this so much either. The idea is cliche and there are way too many fics with the same script. But the thing I like in this one is all how Harry defeted Voldemort and how much that cost him. Well this one doesnt actually be the fic where all that happened but there are these small details that the kids told the others and those are the part I seriously love. How Harry ended to the hospital and how he had to lose one year of his life and how Draco was suppose to make Harry love him again and all tht.

But the plot is all about how their kids come from the future because Hogwards isnt safe for them anymore at their time and how the kids are messing with Harry Potter characters. The mayor part of the plot is how the kids are trying to put their parents together and how that brings drama every possible way. Yea.

Im not gonna say the plot sucks because you can write awesome fics out of plots that are cliches or some other way shitty but then you have to make the storytelling good and so on. This one has a plot that is way beyond the cliche and way too many new characters. There are just too many objects that are doing something and it gets kinda messy and too complex. Okey. Everything is trying to concetrate on Harry and Dracos relationship but the main idea gets lost in too many twist and how people chances their thoughts and everything is coming out of blue all the time.

Okey. I like the storytelling, its good and I like to read this. I just dont like how the fic become one hell of a mess. There are good scenes and everything has it reasons why it goes this way and not that way. Just then there comes hundrets of happening in one chapter and you kinda lost the plot and whats happening. Plus the things that just happens without any reasons.

This would have been great, even awesom fic if there was one more solid plot or just less characters. But it is what it is. And there are lots of people who seriously likes this fic. So yea. Maybe this is worth to read or maybe not. So please, comment and tell what did you think bout this one.