Sometimes actions don't speak louder than words. Sometimes you need to hear someone's feelings to truly believe it. OneShot-NaruSasu-Yaoi
This one is kinda really beautiful even when this has so many cliches. I think part if that beauty is Sasuke being so Sasuke and Naruto being Naruto. Or maybe it is just cuz this is so well written. I dont know but I love this one.
The actual plot is all about cliches after cliches. Sasuke is in love and then Naruto is in love but Sasuke trusts Naruto to read him like an open book and thats where everything wents wrong. Naruto isnt that good at reading Sasuke and they break up. Yea. But this on still gots a happy ending.
Part of this ones beauty is that happy ending. It shows how both of them have to do some sacrifises for their relationship. And all those things make Sasuke to grow a little. And maybe Naruto grows a little bit there too. I think you can see the growing part best at the point where they talk after the break up and understand how they both made all those mistakes just because they didnt really communicate. That also makes the ending even better cuz you got that feeling they are gonna be okey now when they really are talking to each other. Yea. I seriously liked that part of the story.
And then there is this awesome writing style. I dont know how to describle it cuz it feels real and possibly like someone would think just like that. Of course it also felt seriously like Sasuke. Well at least to me it sounded like that. Ha.
But I seriously cant find anything bad about this one even when there are all those cliches how Sasuke doesnt speak about his feelings or how Naruto doesnt speak about important stuff either and how they break up and are just like married couple or something else. This was just so good.
The actual plot is all about cliches after cliches. Sasuke is in love and then Naruto is in love but Sasuke trusts Naruto to read him like an open book and thats where everything wents wrong. Naruto isnt that good at reading Sasuke and they break up. Yea. But this on still gots a happy ending.
Part of this ones beauty is that happy ending. It shows how both of them have to do some sacrifises for their relationship. And all those things make Sasuke to grow a little. And maybe Naruto grows a little bit there too. I think you can see the growing part best at the point where they talk after the break up and understand how they both made all those mistakes just because they didnt really communicate. That also makes the ending even better cuz you got that feeling they are gonna be okey now when they really are talking to each other. Yea. I seriously liked that part of the story.
And then there is this awesome writing style. I dont know how to describle it cuz it feels real and possibly like someone would think just like that. Of course it also felt seriously like Sasuke. Well at least to me it sounded like that. Ha.
But I seriously cant find anything bad about this one even when there are all those cliches how Sasuke doesnt speak about his feelings or how Naruto doesnt speak about important stuff either and how they break up and are just like married couple or something else. This was just so good.
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