Corporate Secrets [Naruto, SasuNaru, Nc-17]

Corporate Secrets by KizuKatana

Everyone knew that Uzumaki Naruto was a businessman you didn't mess with. He was charismatic and able to win deals that left others wondering how they'd been talked into what they'd just signed. He was held up as an example of everything an alpha should be: strong, charismatic, and commanding. What they could never have expected was that Naruto was not, in fact, an alpha. In a society run by alphas, it was a secret that he kept closely guarded. As long as he never encountered his True Mate, he could keep his identity concealed behind scent blockers and suppressants. And with billions of people in the world, he didn't really have to worry about finding his True Mate. Right? Even if he did, Naruto was sure he would just kick the guy's ass and move on. He'd never met an alpha he was attracted to, or one that could match him. He wasn't worried at all.

The whole A/B/O thing is still a huge mystery to me. Like how people have come up with this? Is it somehow linked to Teen Wolf or does it come from somewhere else? How do the genders work? Like there are literally six basic genders and then all those transgenders and the genders in between on top of that. Do they also have all these inhuman powers? Like better smell and taste senses? And how ace people mix in all that if their biology is what it is? Or is asexuality nonexisting in these universes?

So yea. I have way more questions than answers. And I may also have some crazy fic ideas (all betas are ace or maybe omegas actually rule the world because alphas have way too huge ego and can't control themselves, etc etc).

But this fic is something that gave me even more questions about the whole abo thingy. But this also somehow made some sense to the weird world. Like how the people actually have some say over their biology and how the biology only forces their hand so far. They can fight and still make their own decisions even if they are true mates (what the ever that even is).

One thing I really like also is this whole super-successful businessmen idea. Like how they are so hot for each other for that and how they love the excitement it brings. I also liked how their minds worked together and how it all seemed so organic and fluid.

A World of Truth [Naruto, SasuNaru, Kakashi/Obito/Rin NC-17]

A World of Truth by luchia

The world is trapped in an illusion which removes anger, hate, and death. It's paradise, giving everyone everything they've ever wanted and reviving anyone they've ever lost. Nearly two years into the illusion, Sasuke snaps back to his senses and must decide whether to keep the world in false bliss, or return it to war-torn reality.

Wow. I thought that the whole Naruto fandom was dead and that I couldnt find good Sasuke/Naruto fics anymore but fuck was I wrong because this was just awesome.

But the fic. Sasuke wakes up in a world where everything is perfect, everyone is happy and no one dies. Its the perfect world where Sasuke has Naruto and they are happy with their lives. But perfect doesn't mean anything without some flaws and it all just feels fake. So basically the whole fic is Sasuke enjoying the perfect world while trying to decide wether he wants to get out of there or not.

Still thats not the reason why I liked this so much. Maybe I should start with how everything comes so natural to Sasuke and how he still can't actually believe it. On the other hand he just sometimes forgets that its all just one huge illusion and it needs to be gone. And thats the bets part. How the whole fic is all about the middle ground and sometimes it just feels like Sasuke will stay in that world forever until the next second something else happens and Sasuke is back to remembering it all to be fake. Yea.

Also there probably was something about how this is well written and shit like that but I kinda hope you know that already. Hope so. Yup. But yea. This one kinda make me want to go back to read Naruto fanfiction and remind myself why I started to read these things (FYI the first fic I ever read was a Naruto fic, can't remember anything about the fic but that there was Sasuke. And that says a lot. Back then Naruto was a pretty new thing so Sasuke was pretty much in every single fic.)

So hopefully more Naruto fiction coming to this blog again. Yeb. And read and comment and leave kudos. Thanks. (and leave urls to your fav Naruto fics to the comments)

Legendary Playboy [Naruto, SasuNaru, NC-17]

Legendary Playboy by Kaida Matsuki

Naruto's infamous title attracts many lovers into his arms, captivating every one of his admirers, but what if his title was only that? Just a title. His false title that also lures smoldering onyx eyes into discovering his embarrassing secret - Being a virgin. SasuNaru

This is kinda wierd. Like the world is wierd but on the other hand I really understand how this could be possibly. Like seriously. Okey. Not like how these things work but more like how they got to that point.

And the thing is that everybody has only one lover in their whole life. If they cheat or otheway fuck other people, they die. Or was it dying? Dunno. It was a long time ago since I read this and didn't rant about because.. I can't even remember the reason. Probably was too tired or something and only saved the link for the future.

But back to the plot.

Then there is Naruto who seems to be fucking everyone who is willing and the whole ordeal doesn't seem to affect anyone. Yup. The point of the whole fic is that Naruto is trying to find this one guy he shared a kiss (can't remember) and he is trying to find that guy again. And yea, the guy is Sasuke, ofc.

So the best part of the fic is how the thing is just so original. Maybe not like they can only have one lover or how they accidentally end up to the relationship cuz there is no other way when there can only be one lover. The original feeling comes from how there is one thing againts the nature just because they want to find something. And now when I say it like that it doesn't sound so original anymore..

I have no idea how to describle this fic so I could give you a reason to read the whole thing. Probably the best way to say things is that I have never seen anything like this before, yup. And now year or two after I first read this I still haven't come across anything like this. So pretty special like that.

Twentythirds [Naruto, SasuNaruSasu, NC17]

Twentythirds by Erisabesu

When one ritual dies, another is born. [SasuNaruSasu] Yaoi.

I was supposed to blog about another fic before this but well.. Just opened this one first and soo the plans changed. Yeaa.

Anyways. This is all about how everyone thinks Sasuke is dead but Naruto just keeps his hopes up and believes in Sasuke. And Naruto has this weird habit of bringing every year a birthday card to Sasuke and one year Sasuke finds those cards. Year goes by and Sasuke comes back to see Naruto and things start to happen. They fuck, they fall in love and they only meet once a year. And more years go by and Naruto wants Sasuke to stay.

The whole drama in the fic is how Naruto is late one time and Sasuke feels so betrayed and doesnt come back in couple of years. And when he comes back things are different and lots of things change after that too.

Actually now thinking about this one I dont really see any good plot there anywhere. This is just a fic full of a little meetings and feelings and how the life goes on even outside of those meetings. Its beautiful and sad and happy and wonderful, all at the same time. There are lots of fics that I have wanted to be like this, well not exactly. More like where the fic is built together with lots of small scenes that somehow show one thing from different angle or show how one thing can have so many different things or something.

But anyways this is one of those fics that I put to the category of perfection and what I would love to read more. Yea. (you know this kinda fics, just leave a link or name or something so I can find that fic below and i probably will read it).

And to those who want to read hot, sexy scenes, Im sorry but this one doesnt actually have those kinda things even when those two fuck a lot. The whole thing concentrates to all of the things around that fucking and where that fucking leads and what led to the fucking. And I seriously love that thing in the whole fuck. Just love. Pure love. So you should still read this even if you miss those sexy scenes. This is good without those ones.

Cheat [Naruto, SasuNaru, SasuSaku, NaruSaku, NC-17]

Cheat by xrosepetalsx

Naruto and Sasuke have the same girlfriend, but it’s imperative Sakura doesn’t find out they know about her cheating ways. What will come of these two’s situation, and there unusual attraction to one another? Sasunaru onesided Sasusaku and Narusaku AU

I read this first time like forever ago and I kinda fell in love with this then. But of course I forget the whole fic until today and have to say I still like this. Okey. Now when I read this again I found couple things I dont like so much but those things dont make the fic bad or anything they are just there confusing me.

The plot is pretty simple. Sasuke is gay and his fathers hates gays so he wants to disown him but then it would leave him without heir and thats not any good. So he gives Sasuke a change to fall in love with Sakura and marry her. But Sakura isnt as sweet as everyone thinks and is dating Naruto who doesnt even know Sasuke before all this. And the whole fic starts where Naruto has found out that Sakura is cheating on him and Naruto wants to beat Sasuke up. But then they make a deal and becomes friends and ofc they crush on each other. Yeaa.

Dumdidaa.. Okey. Things I didnt like. Or should I just say thing ? I dont know cuz it wasnt there just once it was like in everyfrigginchapter (and there is 11 of those). Anyways. I kinda lost the story everytime that the kinda point of view changed. Like it just moved from Sasuke to Naruto and the you could only notice from the things that Sasuke wouldnt do it that way or something like that. There storytelling was all about he in Sasuke part and in Naruto part there wasnt any mention that now it is Naruto it just kept going like he did this and that.

Okey. I dont know if it as confusing to some one whos native language is English. Maybe there is something that they see and I dont but I couldnt make the difference between those points. Yea.

But the good things. I just loved how Sakura was the bad guy in this one. I dont like the character so its good that sometimes she is the bad guy in fics. Okey. In the ending I dont know... Your point of view changes at the end of her. But I still didnt move to that point where she is all the victim but I dont think she either had to go through all that crap... Well. You will understand when you read this.

And Naruto and Sasuke. First of all fucking big poinst how all the topping and bottom went in the end. It wasnt all that Sasuke is top and Naruto bot they both did the both jobs even when they liked the other thing better which was also good but it didnt make them to stay in that one thing. They were open to the ideas and all. Yea. Poinst from that.

Maybe I didnt like how Naruto was bi but I can undestand it. And I would have loved to have even a little bit Itachi there somewhere and yea. All in all Im not dissapointed or anything. This isnt perfect yet but its not so far from perfect either. And it fit to only have 11 chapters and how it all went around Sasuke and Naruto and some other characters were in the dark almost the whole thing. So yea. Totally worth for reading even if you dont like SasuSaku or NaruSaku. Yeaaa.

Sasuke Says [Naruto, SasuNaru, NC-17, rough, violence]

Sasuke Says by FastForward

Minato Namikaze took everything from the Uchiha family. Their money, their business, their home, absolutely everything. Now, Itachi and Sasuke are going to take it all back, and the only way to do that is to take what Minato holds dear. Payback's a bitch. (SasuNaru.)

Okey. Im so gonna start with saying that Itachi is total douchebag in this one. Yeaa. And then I have to tell you that if you cant stand beating or kidnapping stuff just dont even open this one. This is not one of those pretty ones where Sasuke and Itachi takes Naruto away from home and everything is sweet and perfect and how Naruto gots traumatized just because he has been kidnapped. There is beating and almost raping (huom almost, I dont know any other good word for it so yea almost raping is pretty good right now).

Still the plot is all about how Naruto got this trauma when he was a kid and how Sasuke helps him deal with that trauma after Sasuke and Itachi have kidnapped Naruto and have done some other stupid, awful stuff. And in the end there is this three or something chapter long stuff what happened after they freed Naruto. yea.

But just right now I wanna give lots of and lots of extra credits to how the author stuck with those code names. Those names werent a thing in just talking and crap. If the thing was told in Narutos point of view then Sasuke and Itachi also went with those code names in there. They werent Sasuke and Itachi, they were Essyu and Ayuu.

And the best part of the plot was how there were all the characters mixed together and how there was good balance. The plot didnt bounce from place to place or at least it didnt feel like that. I cant say it was logical how it went from Naruto being in that basement to Minato panicking about his sons life but it would be impossible to even do that. There just isnt a way to make that logical. So it was good, seriously good and I liked how the story showed the scenes from different points of views. It was also awesome how the scene looked so different from Sasuke and Narutos points of view than from Minatos view. Just credits from this one too.

The thing I loved the most in this one was how both Sasuke and Naruto were forced to be there. Well there nowhere was seriously said that Itachi forced Sasuke to be part of all that kidnapping part and crap but you could totally induce that from the fact that Sasuke didnt wanna be there and how he wanted to make sure Naruto wasnt in so bad shape and how he was almost all the time trying to make Itachi be kinder to Naruto. That fact also made it kinda more logical to me that those two would fall in love and made it even possible for them to trust each other.

Okey. I kinda cant make it seem logical in my head them to fall in love or have any of that relationship they had in there if Sasuke didnt feel like forced to be there. I dont know if anyone even agrees with me in this one but thats how my mind makes this all even some how possible to happen. So yea.

All in all this was awesome to read (even with those not so nice parts but they are part of the world so get over it) and as long as you can tolerate the violence in this one you should totally read this. This one isnt even so long that it could be a way to say no for reading this. So yeaa. Read this. You just have to read this (like you have to read almost all the other fics that I have ranted in this blog, haahahah).

The Demilitarized Zone [Naruto, SasuNaru, KakaIru NC-17]

The Demilitarized Zone by michelerene

Itachi Uchiha has always had a sadistic streak when it came to his little brother. Now the perfect opportunity has presented itself and he just can’t let it go by. He does love him after all. SasuNaru

Sometimes I seriously have to rethink this whole thing about fanfics. Like seriously. Why the fuck people even bother to write stories that are almost completely the same. It doesnt matter how the fic starts or how the beging or layout is unique there just everytime is something that is the exact copy from somewhere else. Like fucking seriously.

This one, excample, was awesome in the beging. I seriously liked Sasuke and Narutos relationship and how it affected to everyone and what everyone did to keep the two separated from each other. I also liked the idea bout sending them to a camp where they have to work together and become a team. It was also a pretty logical how they worked together and how the whole fic show that. After they left that place a little bit too early and the reasoning behind that was good too and how it explained Narutos chilhood and crap. I seriously loved this fic to this point, gotta give that.

Okey. I dont know the exact point where I started to feel like I have read this all this before. There was just too much with all that adoption thing in the past where Kakashi had to fight to keep Naruto with him and Iruka. Then there was this part where I think Orochimaru kidnapped Naruto when he was five or something and how Naruto got all depressed and shit afterwards. But I havent read this whole thing (and Im really sorry to say that but Im not gonna read this one to the end, Im not gonna explain why but I think its gonna pretty clear why after you have read this post) and I dont know for sure what happened or what is gonna happen or anything.

It just gots so cliche with the whole Orochimaru is gonna cause some shitty stuff to Naruto just because he can. I would like to even have a proper reason to all that shit, money or more power or something seriously big and meaningfull but in this one I just feel that he is just gonna do it because he can do that and thats why he does that. I can be wrong and I would love someone to correct me and give a reason to read this one to the end (I have read the first 9 chapters).

But I dont wanna you think that this is one hell of big bag full of shit. Because this isnt. The writing is just so awesome and beautiful and there are so many good things in it. Especially there is lots of flashbacks that dont have the label flashback on them. The story just goes and then there is flashback that has something to do with the present, like that car cash that killed Narutos biological parents was told the same time that in the present there was another car crash. And then there was this story about Naruto and Gai's first meeting and how Naruto had to meet Gai again in the present part. It doesnt feel like coming out of nowhere because those are told in so many little pieces. The only hard part is that sometimes its hard to keep track which one is going on right now and which one is past but there isnt any problem with that if you just read the fic and concentrate on it.

Then there is this awesome writing  style that I cant describle to you, I can only show:

Floor fourteen belonged to the two Vice Presidents of the company, Sasuke Uchiha and Naruto Uzumaki.

And, truth be told, the situation put a whole new definition to "this town ain't big enough for you and me."

Okey. That was kinda bad excample but the others would take like seriously long quote and I dont wanna show you the whole fic, just wanna tell the best / worse parts about it. Ha. So anyways. The writing is definetly a good reason to read this one.

Yea. But because I havent and Im not gonna read this to the end please comment and tell if the end is worth for reading. Im not gonna argue with anyone about that because I dont know and right now I dont even wanna know cuz I dont like this one right (even with the awesome parts, which is seriously sad if you really think bout it). So feel free to change my mind about this one.

The First Time [Naruto, SasuNaru, NC-17]

The First Time by vermilioncream

After being haunted by wet dreams of a certain black haired teme, Naruto is starting to realize he might be attracted to Sasuke. What will happen when you add alcohol into the mix? One-shot. Complete.

Figuring Things out by vermilioncream

Naruto and Sasuke wake up after a night of drunken sex. Will they talk about it, or decide to act like nothing happened between them? Sequel to "The first time". Complete.

It seriously hard to find anything thats worth for reading. Everything just feels like it has been just written without any thought or even putting time to it. It just is there and the writer thinks everyone is gonna love it and when people dont love it the writer goes all angst and stops writing because they think everyone is telling them how they bad people. But at least I found this one. Yea. Two oneshots.

Okey. I have to admit that this one is cliche in the beging. Naruto finds out he is in love with Sasuke and they drink and they fuck. But the fic doesnt end there (well, if you wanna skip the sequel oneshot then it ends there). There is this morning talk where they try to understand each other and make some decisions and how they are gonna survive from all this. So. The end is not so cliche. Its actually good that someone is finally writing the stuff that everyone else just skips and doesnt wanna write if its not seriously long fic where have to be everything. Yea.

And then I seriously fell in love with that morning talk. Like seriously. It was all awkward and crap. It was good and it felt real like that something like would totally happen like that. Well. The fic anyway felt real and how it would all be happening. Okey. Maybe Sasukes all knowning stuff is little bit over but i liked it also cuz its kinda helped everything to move forward and so on.

I have to also admit that there is one version how Naruto got Sasuke back and how Sasuke forgot all about the revenge and can live in Konoha and how everything is just perfect in this little world they are living in. And then there is also everyone finding someone which I also liked. There were told about almost everyones happy endings too, not just Sasuke and Narutos. 

I dont even know if there was a part I didnt like... Maybe there was something seriously small that I forgot the minute I stopped reading. But cant remember right now so I can almost say they didnt excist. Ha. Yea. But what do you think? Was there a something not so good in this one ?

Slumberland [Naruto, NaruSasuNaru, NC-17]

Slumberland by Ladelle

When Naruto's world literally fades to black, he is left with one resolve: to find the one who saved him. Naru/Sasu/Naru

I dont really remember why I stopped to read  this the first time. Maybe this was too long or too different. But now I kinda like this. I dont love this or anything there just is something that I like even a little bit.

But in the begin some aliens come to the earth and the whole world ends in a chaos. One of the Aliens saves Naruto from being killed and of course that one is Sasuke. Then there is lots of running and other shit where Naruto finds out things about government and how the aliens and humans were once the same and yea. There are just so much things about gods and aliens and other languages and how humans cannot progress some things and so on.

Anyway the whole fic isnt one big mess with all the details. There is some sense and it all is well written. All in all I cant really say a bad word about this even when I didnt like this so much. This was just so different. I dont know if it is good kind of different of bad kind. It depends who is saying because there isnt so much cliches maybe a cuople like Sasuke has to return to earth cuz he cant stop thinking Naruto and the way the plot wast told.

Still there isnt anything that is bad. This just isnt something I like to read. So yea. Comment about this. I cant really say anything but try and read it. You cant say you dont like it if you dont try it cuz this is good fic it just doesnt fit to everyone. Yea. If you like scifi, aliens and how government sometimes sucks more than normally then yea you could like this.

Dreams Aren't Real [Naruto, SasuNaru, NC-17]

Dreams Aren't Real by Dashel

Naruto is dreaming about Sasuke every night. Is this a chance to make peace with his old friend before the end or something else entirely?

This fic has so many things you can guess before they happen but still doesnt ruin the fic, at least, it didnt ruin it for me. It was fun and somehow those things still had some surprises with them. And ofc there are also lots of things you couldnt have guessed before.

But the plot is pretty simple. Naruto is dreaming about Sasuke and those dreams starts to affect to his life a little bit. First they are these innocent ones where he tries to catch Sasuke but after awhile they start to talk and develops a new bond. The dreams chance everytime their relationship chances and then everything chances all over again when Naruto cant stop dreaming or when Naruto finds out that dream-Sasuke is the real Sasuke. And everything feels just right.

Dreams Aren't Real actually has three parts in it that together have those 15 chapters. Its logical when I new part starts always and blahblahblah. But I liked that decision very much. It kinda gave the fic a rythm and everything went with those three parts.

Anyways... I have nothing to say about this fic XD No really. I don't know what to say. I read this about a week ago and havent figured what to say. This isnt cliche which is awesome thing and I really like about that but other than that I have no idea.

This is or isnt one of those fics that just takes you and you cant stop reading. I liked to read this but I didnt really fell in love with this. But this still is good and totally worth for reading and maybe I'm gonna read this again. Okey, there was one part I really fell in love with and it was the ending. I couldnt guess it beforehand it all came to me in litte pieces and that hold it together and made it good to me.

I also loved Itachi's part in this one. How he still was so important in Sasuke's life even when Sasuke had killed him before. And this really felt so natural in that ninja world that no character wasn't even ooc. Dreams Aren't Real doesn't really have any bad sides and maybe thats the reason I don't know what to say about this. It just has to read and figure out on your own. Yea.

After The World Fell Down [Naruto, SasuNaru, NC-17, violence]

After The World Fell Down by Zephyras

Naruto has been fighting a war for the life of his neighborhood for the past four years, with no end in sight. His world is violent, arbitrary, and ruthless, but it is simple. It makes sense. And then Uchiha Sasuke screws everything up. AU, Modern. 2010 SN EXCHANGE FIC.

I didn't have any ideas about this fic when I started to read it. First I was kinda disapointed but after awhile I really started to like this. The weird thing is why I started to like this so suddenly but to me it doesn't really matter at all. It's a fic and  I liked it and thats the most important thing.

But the plot basically is Naruto and his friends trying to get rid of the yakuza that has come to their town. They have been fighting a long time and hadnt really gotten any further with anything. But then yakuza (Orochimaru) hires a new guy and this new guy is better fighter than the earlier people and things start to change. Ofc this new guy is Sasuke and he and Naruto are always fighting and then there is this this kiss.. And you can guess the rest.

Okey. I really liked how this was written how good it was and how it there was only the main thing and the fightin wasnt so over portrayed. Everything had limits. Then the characters werent some miracle guys who can survive from anything. They got bruises, they went to hospital because of the bruises and they died.

I also liked how everything affected to everything. How Naruto missed his friedns who had died and how they were still part of his everyday life. It felt real and got under your skin. Then came Sasuke's influence and that really affected to Naruto even when they didnt do so much but you could still see it there under almost every sentence.

What I didnt like was the ending, okey how they got out new life and such was good but it everything was so easy. Everything went so smoothly like there wasnt happening anything. One minute they were dieing and the next minute they were dancing and partying. It all felt too easy and felt like there werent any consequenses with their "new life". I don't know how to explain it to you without telling the whole ending, but I think you get it when you have read it.

Ou yea. I know this has... what 33 000 words (?) and its still an oneshot but so what? Its good and totally worth for reading. Well if you have enough time to read that long oneshot : DD

Coup de Foudre [Naruto, SasuNaru, NC-17]

Coup de Foudre by dax11

An arranged marriage between royals for the purpose of an alliance between their countries. As they say, all is fair in love and war. SasuNaru

Horses, like really, horses? And I thought I was too picky with the stories I read. This fic.... Okey. I can't get over the fact that there are horse breeds. Akhalteke and Friesian, really. There was like this little, minor detail about those breeds but still, you can see the resemblance.

But besides the horse breeds there is this crazy marrige thing between these two. Sasuke is this king and Naruto has been forced to marry him because of some benefits. They havent had sex yet and now Sasuke has to have fuck Naruto. Okey. Yea. Thats it.

Maybe this is PWP (porn without plot). But I'm not so sure, there is this kinda plot in there but I don't know if I can say that it really is a plot. So yea. Maybe, maybe not.

Anyways. I don't have any idea what I read and thats it. This was good written, really. There just were a couple things that were kinda bad and didnt get enough explanations and was kinda out of contect. So this was good even when there was a couple errors. But yea. Worth of reading.

Stranger Island [Naruto, SasuNaru, NC-17]

Stranger Island by wishmaker101

Being coworkers didn't necessarily mean they had to get along. As unexpected events unfold, Sasuke learns to see that he isn't always right with judging others. SasuNaru

Okey. What did I just read? I have no idea. Like really. First they were filming and then there was party and then the storm and finally that island... The whole fic doesn't make any sense to me. But still I kinda liked it. Yea.

But Sasuke is some big actor and so is Naruto. They make this ninja series and ends up the final party to celebrate the first season's airing or something. Then Sasuke just wents outside and Naruto follows but then comes this big storm and they almost drowns. Yea. Somehow they survives from all that and ends up in an island. There then shit happens and thei start bonding and I really didn't get the ending..

So... An oneshot that doesn't make any sense to me. Well, everything in this was logical, expect the ending that I didn't get but whatever. Every character and what happened in their minds and so on was logical. Their bonding and all that. And this wasn't even so much cliche than you would think. There was a couple cliches but those werent so bad. Actually they were cliches that I haven't thought to be cliches until recently. So not so bad.

Okey. Have to say but I thought that whole island part was a dream or something. And in the end they would just wake up and realize how they had seen the same dream and go on from there. Yea. But I don't know if the ending was disappointment or not.

Right now I'm really big questionmark about this and I think I'm gonna stay like that for a long time. Well untill I forget the whole fic but thats just minor thing. Ha.

Roadtrip Chapter [Naruto, SasuNaru, NC-17]

Roadtrip by Dattebayo1987Chan

Sasuke ended his relationship with Naruto seven years ago. Due to circumstances, the two are forced on a minor road-trip together, and Sasuke starts to remember why he loved Naruto. SasuNaruSasu Yaoi AU Lemon

 First I thought this could be something new and fresh. Not some cliche with every living cliche. But I was wrong, so wrong.

So. Sasuke broke up with Naruto because... well that part wasnt explained there at least I didnt notice which is just stupid. And then seven (?) years later they meet at the airport and start a roadtrip together cuz it's just possible that all the planes are full and so are trains and busses and other public transports. Of course Sasuke has to be the one who rented the last car also. So they have to spent a day together and travel. And the whole trip they just think how they should go together and thats it. Yea I know, you know already how this is gonna end. But I'm not gonna tell you any yes or no, so go read it if you really want to know.

Anyways. I don't think there was so much things I liked. The writing style was kinda boring and everything (except the one thing I wanted to know) was explained. The explains were full of cliches and it just made me feel like they did everything because these characters are suppose to always do those things. There just weren't that nice playing with the characert. It was like this has to go this way because it has always went this way and I don't really like that. There are way too many fics with cliches and there isnt any reason to read thousands of same fics, or is there?

I don't wanna just mock this and tell how crappy this fic was. I don't really think that so many people even finds this crappy at all. But I just didn't like this. The main reason is all the cliches. Everything in this fic is cliche. From the beging how these two are doomend to be together even when they broke up in the past. And then how they are still attracted to each other and how they give up in the end. I think my opinion would have changed so much if the ending was different from Naruto's choices. If he had made different choice in the end I think I would like this fic. Because it would totally have changed the whole fic and the cliches wouldnt have been so bad. Really. But not so many writer want to do that kinda endings, so yea.

So. I don't know... The teaching of this fic is that don't put every friggin cliche into an one fic, its not cool, its just plain stupid and boring. Make something up and space the things up. Just try to do something new and exciting and maybe I'm gonna like it too. But just now, this is too cliche for me. I have read thousands of this kinda fics and thats not fun after a hundret, so try to understant me.

Okey. I don't think this was totally disastear fic. There is good and  I read the whole fic so thats saying something. So read it and make your own opinion of it. This is just my opinion.

It Started Over Coffee [Naruto, SasuNaru, NC-17]

It Started Over Coffee by Rasengan22 

Naruto's polite gesture wins him a new friend. A very witty, charming one at that. Sasuke/Naruto.

I fell in love with this from the begin. I don't think it even took a sentenced for me to fall in love. It Started Over Coffee is just so cute and innocent when its at the same time also so raw and its not so innocent after all. I dont know. But this really feels so frickin innocet and the same time it isnt. So yea. Innocent but not so innocent.. Makes so much sense, I know.

However. Naruto sits in Starbucks and Sasuke walks in and needs a place to sit. So they start talking and then they starts drinkin and ends up in Sasukes place and so on. But they don't fuck or anything like that. They talk about fuckin and they talk about their relationship and so on. Of course they kiss but thats only a detail.

The whole fic with 11 chapters isnt only about that one night but I'm not gonna spoil you and tell what else happens that would just be stupid. But the 11 chapter is about how Naruto falls for a guy and figures he isnt so straight anymore and how these two gets together. And that is the reason why this is so innocent: Naruto is so naive and innocent with Sasuke and their relationship with each other.

But It Started Over Coffee isnt so innocent because Sasuke and Naruto arent new at the whole sex thing and they can get dirty with each other and talk naughty and do dirty things. Even when Naruto is new at gay sex and gay relationship he still can be same naughty, dirty Naruto. I really can't say if this is innocent or not. Really. So this has to be both.

And then after all that happenings and scenes there is their dialogue. It feels so real and their lines isnt just text, they are almost like they were alive and real people were talking. I don't think I have ever read such a good dialogue than this has. And that says a frickin lot.

I have to take a quatation from fic to show you. I don't think you would other ways belive me.

"I'm not that strange. I'm just hyped up on caffeine. Which you bought me, by the way. And I like to make conversation with strangers. I'm a people person, and you're sort of interesting."

"Sort of?"
"Yeah well, I didn't want it to go to your head or whatever. So what's your cat's name?"
"Uh, it doesn't have one."
"Your cat doesn't have a name? Is this like a Breakfast at Tiffany's thing? Do you just call him Cat?"
"I don't call him anything. He belonged to my mom, and when she died a few years back, I took him."
"So you've had him for years but never named him? Let's think of a name now. You've got to name him, Sasuke!"

Okey. I didn't really have the energy to go and really find a perfect dialogue part but this has to do it now. Anyways this is really, really good and if you don't find any other reason why to read this I have to say that the dialogue is the almost perfect (because nothing is perfect) reason to read this fic. Really. Fucking go at least check out the frickin dialogue. I love it and I hope you will love it too. And now I have to go and write a couple word to Rasengan22 and tell how much I love this dialogue. So really. Go and read it.

A Thousand Generations [Naruto, SasuNaru, NC-17]

A Thousand Generations by Fifi McFu

Sentenced to a thousand rebirths, Sasuke isn't enjoying the life of a mortal one bit. That is, until he changes school and lays eyes on a remnant from the Old Times who doesn't seem to remember him. SasuNaru

Okey. This is one of the fics that I love to read again and again and again. Actually I think I would love this even if this was a multichapter fic. This is just so frickin awesome to just be a oneshot. But A Thuosand Generations works when it's only oneshot, so not complaining here.

The story is about Sasuke who has sentenced to a thousand rebirths and starts in a new school where is Naruto. They are buddies from the Old Times and then Sasuke just is so angst and wants to be with Naruto and so on. But in the end everything is okay and yea. Not gonna tell you the ending, sometimes I just have to be mean.

Anyways. What I love in this is how there is so fluently told the present time and what happened 8000 years ago and how that all is mixed together. I also like that these guys arent some kinda angels, they are gods who broke the rules and got their punishmet. I don't think I even found a one cliche from A Thousand Generations fic. Like really.

The other thing I really, really love is all that information and how it works in there because there is lots of information. But even when there is lots of information it works, like its not crappy and it isnt just there it fits to there story and makes the story to go forward. And I have no idea how describe it in English, because I just dont know the right words and nothing feels right.

Of course the characters are awesome too and fits to the story and everything just feels like Fifu McFu has really give time to this and really but themselves into this story. I just cant say anythint negative about this. Its really hard and I would have to really look into it to find something. Okey, I have a feeling that even if I really looked for some errors or bad sides I don't think I could even find those.

If there was something that is perfect, I would say it is this. Really. I love this. Really, really love.

Not A Good Day [Naruto, SasuNaru]

Not A Good Day  by dmnq8

"Uchiha Sasuke. Jock. Cool. Smart. Gorgeous. Straight." AU, Shonen-ai, SasuNaru. Giftfic for Girl Who Changed Her Pen Name. Disclaimer in my profile.

Another Crap Day   by dmnq8

Yes. Another one of THOSE days. Sequel to 'Not A Good Day.' Shonen-ai. For Girl Who Changed Her Pen Name. Sasunaru. Disclaimer in my profile.

The Day From Hell  by dmnq8

Worst day yet, no lie. Sequel to Not A Good Day, Another Crap Day. AU Giftfic for Girl Who Changed Her Pen Name. SasuNaru, shonen-ai. Disclaimers in my profile.

I wasn't even suppose to read anything new today. I was looking for this one old fic I had read a long time ago and then I got lost and found this. First, of course, I thought I had read this before but no : D lucky me. Because this fic, or rather these three fics, are frickin awesome.

Basically all those three fics are telling how Sasuke makes Naruto's days better. Naturally Sasuke is kinda OOC but it fits better that way. Okey, the whole idea wouldn't even work if Sasuke wasn't a little bit ooc.

But I love these fics because of Naruto. He is just so Naruto and so real. His personality is way too colorful and in this saga Naruto's personality really shines. I got this feeling that the whole fic bases on that colorful personality and how raw Naruto's feelings are and how they got him in trouble but also together with Sasuke.

That the whole thing is written from Naruto's point of view just makes everything so much better and more real. To me it feels like it is bringing the whole fic into its true glory. I just love it and thats it.

But the other characters... I don't know. There isn't so much stuff about them. There is enough that they arent so hollow but not enough for me to rant about. There isn't even much about Sasuke. The only thing I can say is that he is a little bit OOC cuz c'moon Sasuke isn't suppose to make Naruto's day better without being a bastard and he can't answer questions without being an ass. And unfortunaly Sasuke isn't any of that in this fic. But, like I said somewhere in the begin, this fic wouldn't function if Sasuke was that smug bastard that he always is. So this time I have to forgive that minor thing, only for the fics sake : D

Anyways. I think you should read these fics when you want something really sappy reading that has happy endings. Yeah. Totally worth for reading : D