Tokechester Hall is a fairly large mansion, just outside of Bath. Its brown brick walls are covered in ivy, a vibrant green that contrasts the bright blue sky above. It is an old house, owned by generation after generation of proud landlords, always given to the oldest son of the family. Its parks stretch far beyond what the eye can see, the land adorned with small cottages, homes to the people working at Tokechester Hall. Small rivers twist around trees and rocks, making their way towards the large lake at the end of the property. It is a beautiful spot, untouched and perfect, almost too good to be true.Maybe I shouldnt be reading any horse fics cuz they are making me cry. Mostly my crying has nothing to do with the actual story. Its just that horses are kinda my dream that is never going to happen and nots not nice. So reading stories about people who wants/can work with horse is just über sad for me or something. And this is no exception.
But the plot itself is far from sad and tragedy. Okey. There is couple scenes where you just wanna cry but thats it. Well. At least as far I have read this and I have like two or something chapters left. Ha. But the story is about Tom whose parents have died and his brothere have abandoned him. He has a pony called Bruno and he is Toms best friend until he meets mysterious Bill who works for the girl that Tom has crush on. They become friends and after a while something else. And the same time Bill is always telling how Lady Elizabeth likes Tom and hos sweet and good Lady Elizabeth is and Tom of course has a crush on Lady Elizabeth. Yeaa.
Okey. Before I tell you the whole story I just have to be proud how this could be real, and with that I mean the horse parts. The horses arent there just animals who lives in stable and gets food once a day and the riding isnt just galloping across the fields and thats it. There is worry about horses and how much can they do and how people have to take care of the horses and blahblahblah. You can see how the writer has taken time to write this and make it all believable even for a horseperson. Im giving so much points for that.
And then I like how there isnt any mistakes with peoples ranking and how they are living in the world where is social class and how it is affecting people. The only in the story that has trouble keeping up all the sir and lady and miss crap is Bill but yeaa. Its Bill. So why its all that happening is totally different. Ha. And Im not gonna give any spoilers so just go and read the story if you wanna know.
What else? Ofc this is well written and crap. Maybe there isnt anything special about the writing or anything. It still doesnt mean that its shitty. It has it own good things and bad things.. well I have no idea what the bad things are soo hard to say about those. Ha. But still totally worth for your time. Jeb. Yeaa.