Hidden in their basement is the most wonderful secret the boys could have ever imagined, a strip club, seriously could it get any better than this?First of all I read this first time something like a year or two ago and totally fell in love. And now I was just way too bored to do anything and found this again.. Have to say but this is as great as it was when I read this first time.
Well that depends, would it be even better if Bill felt the urge to ‘dance’
Okey. This one's story is about how Bill and Tom found out that they have a strip club in their basement and how Simone has been able to keep that thing a secret the past nine years. Yea. Of course there is smut and brotherly love and Bill stripping (yea you read right, Bill stripping and dancing with that pole). And dont forget the thing called a lap dance.
This whole fic is so inappropriate. Like fucking really. Tom has so naughty thoughts from the begin and then he tries to reason them to himself. Then there is Bill who just thinks okey when Tom is like way toooo overprotective over his brother. Maybe Bill is a little bit too naíve in this one but well its TB so Bill kinda has to be a little bit naíve if Im honest.
But even when this is so inappropriate this kinda screams the word virgin. Everybody just is so.... I dont know. Maybe not so experienced. Yea. Maybe. I hope you got the point. And it brings this all that sweetness and loveliness. Yea. Then together those things make this almost a perfect fic. Yea.
Still. One of the best things in this one was how good all the characters fit to the story. Everyone felt like they were part of the story and not some kinda stupid fanfiction. There wasnt those stupid things that has to put there like some fanfic does (well at least I didnt notice, haha).
And then the things I didnt like this one.... Andy. I didnt like Andy. He was tease and had the worts timings ever but he made this kinda good and made me feel good about the story and it made me happy so maybe I still liked it. So there really wasnt any things I didnt like. Yea.
Because I really cant figure more things to say about this one I have to end this comment with my favorite part of the whole fic. Ofc Im telling you to read this but that was more than obvious. Ha.
”If I owned a strip club I’d call it…Kaulitzex.” Tom made a show of gesturing out in the air above him as if indicating a big sign. Him and Bill were in Tom’s room, more precisely on Tom’s bed. They were small talking off the strip bar down stairs, about what moves Bill should ask Janice to teach him next, and cuddling a bit of course.
Basically being normal teenage boys. Well, maybe one could scratch ’normal’, it wasn’t exactly normal to discuss the ’strip bar in the basement’. Other than that it was correct…well maybe scratch ’boys’ too, when talking about Bill’s new moves he seemed more like a girl anyway. And the cuddling part…it was brotherly…almost. For Tom and Bill at least it was brotherly, for everybody else…well everybody else didn’t know so, problem solved.
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