Tom loves his brother, Bill is everything to him. And of course Bill loves him back, even though Tom can sometimes get a little intense. What Bill doesn’t know is that Tom craves more. But Bill, Bill is too innocent to see and being the older brother Tom would never, ever hurt his twin by telling him. Tom really, really loves his little brother…I have read this probably over 100 times already and I still can't not to read this. This is just good. Seriously just good.
But the plot is all about how they are so fucking in love with each other but are too afraid to tell each other. Their relationship is almost dating already, they just haven't admitted it to each other yet, or to themselves. Okey. Maybe there are couple misunderstanding and really stupid ones but in this one those things actually don't matter that much. Those things just makes them more human than before.
Still. The best part of this is the begining of every chapter. There is Tom telling how much he loves Bill and its all sappy and shit like that but those parts are just pure gold. I don't think I have ever read anything that contains so much love as those little parts. And thats it.
What I don't like in this one... Mostly probably the part how Tom treats Bill such a child in his head. Bill is just innocent and doesn't understand what he is doing or things like in Tom's head. Maybe it is all that brotherly love or shit like that but sometimes it just goes overboard. It's not bad thing because it makes the whole fic have more sense and not feel so stupid (and makes the misunderstandings actually tolerable) but its not something I really like in this one. Thats it.
All in all this is still good. Don't dismiss that. Just read it.
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