"We might," Cas starts slowly, pausing like he's choosing his words. "We might have to kiss."I liked the whole calm thing. How things happened but it just felt so call ans peaceful and like life is just floating there somewhere. Yea. Small boat on a sunny floating on a peaceful river.
Dean just stares at him.
I also liked 99% percent of this writing style. It was good. Pretty amazing at some points. The whole Dean just wanting Cas so much was good, how they both just were on the cliff getting there but not just taking that final step. And in the end the step wasnt even so big. It was just a step and everything was better because of it.
Also Cas wasnt an angel anymore. Maybe the most important part. Maybe.
There was this one small part in the whole fic I did not like. At one point there was about ten to twenty sentences that were just repeating itself. Every other word was either Cas or Dean. No synonymous, no he or any other way you could express Cas and Dean. Just their names over and over again. People. Stop doing this. It is awful to read and looks awful and just plain wrong, okey?
But besides that small part it was pretty amazing fic. Yup.
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