The last thing Sasuke wanted to do for Christmas was be stuck in the middle of nowhere with buckets of snow and an annoying neighbour who won't leave him alone. NaruSasu.I read this first time like a year ago or something like that. And I fell in love with this withing the first chapter. Okey. I have to admit right now that this is not perfect or even near perfection, there is one or two seriously big flaws in there but the story wouldnt work without those flaws so Im not gonna bitch about them so much. Ha.
The plot is all about how everyone is just so damn rich and how the kids suffer from it. Sasuke have to spend the christmas in England and he cant stand snow or christmas so you can guess how he hates every moment of it. And Naruto is this stupid not as rich as everyone else but still pretty damn rich. You know they hook up and have fantastic time and they do lots of different things together. Well the normal crap in every fic.
The drama in this one is Kiba and Sasuke and how Naruto cant introduce them to each other... cuz ? Well Naruto is stupid and makes reasons that doesnt even make sense in his head. Yea. But its not as crappy as it sounds. Its good and this would be boring without all drama in Narutos head. Hahhaha. And that didnt just sound so wrong. Whatever.
But I said there were couple seriously big flaws. Like seriously big flaws. Firs of all. In Great Britannian there isnt 75cm snow. Just now way in hell. And if there is even 10cm snow the whole fucking country is in panick and schools would be closed and shops and all the fucking places and road blocked cuz its just too dangerous for the people to be driving. And in this one there is snowing all the fucking time and they have to clear the driveway almost every day in this one. And even if there is like 10cm snow you wouldnt have to do that cuz there isnt a normal car in the whole fucking world that couldnt just drive over that snow and it wouldnt be okey. So there is snowing like seriously much and its not British stuff. Just no way in hell.
I think I could bitch all about that but Im not gonna cuz Naruto and Sasuke meets over the cleaning the driveway and its good thing and I liked that cuz it was different and original and unique. So I think I just have to shut it and let fiction be fiction where there can be 1m snow in fucking England and not raining. Yea.
Anyways. The good things ? humm... Roleplaying in real life to keep things interested, way too real conversations:
"What?!"
"It's not a broom, you know."
"What?"
"The shovel you're holding? It's a shovel. Not a broom. Stop sweeping the snow, it's taking you twice as long as it should be."
"And what do you know about shovelling snow?"
"Uh, a lot, considering I spend Christmas here every year, and every year, I'm the one outside shovelling the driveway."
"Well if you're such a damn expert, why don't you come over here and shovel my driveway?"
"And miss out on watching you gripe and moan? Not a chance, princess."
"Fuck you, dumbass."
And then their chemistry. Its like awesome and how they dont fight it and how they are real people over it. They arent just fighting or fucking, more they are all the time doing everything to piss each other off and trying to have their own way with the other the same time. Its like a big mess that somehow makes perfect sense. Kinda hard to explain but I seriously like it.
Ou. And they just dont jump to the bed right away. They built the trust and sexual tension and ofc they also consider lots of crap with it and gosh. Then there is this perfect Itachi that mixes everything just the perfect way to mess with both of them. Yeaaa.
The only thing I dont like is that big drama Naruto makes inside his head and how he thinks Sasuke and Kiba couldnt stand each other because of reason. And that reason is just stupid and Naruto is just stupid. Okey. It kinda fits there and makes Naruto Naruto all that stupid over thinking and making decisions for other people. At the same time I like it and I dont like it. Ha. Doesnt make sense but what in my ranting could even make sense ? Nothing. So yeaa..
Anyways. If anything is worth for reading its this one. Just try and thats it.
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