maanantai 22. helmikuuta 2016

don't fall asleep in in the moonlight, she'll make you sweat [Teen Wolf, Derek Hale/Stiles Stilinski, Allison Argent/Scott McCall, Vernon Boyd/Erica Reyes]

don't fall asleep in in the moonlight, she'll make you sweat by hoars
There bruises on Derek's chest from where Stiles pushed Derek. Two purple-red impressions of the heel of Stiles' palms. Derek pokes them curiously. 
Derek's never had bruises before Stiles.
First Im going to complain how people don't use capital letters in their fic names anymore. Yes, I know you can use it sometimes to make a point or be different or whatever floats your boat. But this is getting rididcculous. It feels like no one use caps anymore anywhere. English is a language and to keep that language alive and keep people understanding whats the right way you are suppose to use the langauge correctly. So please. Use the caps.

But the fic itself was.. different. Fuck that.

I liked how someone actually took the whole mate thing and added something actually new to it. Like not just all that usual, cliche crap that you can read in almost any soulmate/mate fics. The bruising was new and exciting and I really, really liked it.

I also liked how it was not something that everyone just knew, how Derek had to work it out in his head before he was sure. How Erika and Boyd made sense and how Derek dealed with it (okey, he could always done better but we are talking about Derek). It just kept every character as their own and (as far as I can remember) no one was OOC. Just really good work with all that.

There were probably tons of other good stuff that I should mention but I want you to find them and just understand how I liked this and found this good and different. And totally worth of reading. Like seriously. Just read it.

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