"Sherlock was his best friend. Surely a once off, never to be spoken of again hand job was acceptable. Right…?" Teen!lock sleepover. Slash, lemons. Just one of those oneshots full of young Johnlock goodness.I'm gonna start with all the things I dont like about this fic. Maybe its not fair cuz there isnt so many things I like in this one. A Helping Hand (only the name in alone is cliche but I dont like ranting about name cuz I can almost never find a good name to any of my fics) was so average hand job fic. I think there are thousands of them in every fandom, like seriously. And then they all have the same kinda plot where two friends (or brothers or something) spends night together and, for some reason or other, sleep in the same bed and then the other gets a hard on and you can guess the rest.
So the plot of A Helping Hand basically is that John gets a fucking hard on from gay porn and then Sherlock wants to help with it. And following millions of other fics footsteps, John doesnt want Sherlock's help at first but Sherlock finally Sherlock gets his mind and they are happily jacking each other off. Yea. Thats it.
I dont wanna be cruel and tell you this was total shit and you dont have any reason to read this but if someone likes to write these kinda fics there has to be someone to like reading this. So I have to bother and say couple good words about this fic, because this wasnt total shit (only the way too cliche plot was).
I cant ignore how good written this was (even I had enough patient to read the whole fic and I'm normally so lazy reading this kinda fics). Ofc there were couple cliche things like:
John could feel his face burning. Sherlock found him attractive? Sherlock fantasised about him? For how long? Why hadn't he ever said anything? Why him? And why did he still have a goddamn erection?!But those were only minor things that almost every fic has so I'm not saying it bad stuff. The only thing I dont like it is how cliche it is (almost everything is cliche for me already so yea). I cant even understand why everyones thoughts have to go the same route every time and they have to be displayed the same way. There are millions of other ways and writers job practially is to find all the different ways to display things. And that is the reason why I dont like those mind explosions where characters are always asking the same questions the same way. I really hope someone understands what I'm talking about cuz it would be awesome to hear other opinions about this matter.
Anyways. The other thing I liked in was the dialog. Sherlock felt so Sherlock kinda while he spoke and he didnt felt to so ooc (out of character). John was a little bit ooc (being a shy little little virgin boy) but its fucking impossible to write these kinda fics without someone being ooc.
I dont know. Maybe someone likes these ones and gets off with this kinda things. But not me. I dont like and normally I dont read, this was totally accident I even opened this one, so yea.
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