maanantai 16. heinäkuuta 2012

The Bet [Harry Potter, HD, Ron/Herm]

The Bet by BregoMelloNin
Harry cannot seem to find the right girl, so Hermione takes the matter into her own hands. After further unsuccessful dating, Hermione gets suspicious and she extends a bet. Maybe what Harry needs isn't a girl at all and she intends to find out
Ou god this was good. Really good. And Harry was just way too innocent until in the end where there was a new Harry. God. Yea.

Anyways. So Harry losts a bet to Hermione. He was suppose to go out with a girl and kiss that girl and like that kiss. But yea, you know Harry, he is just way too gay for Draco to do that. So he kisses the girl but didnt really enjoy it so Hermione drags Harry to club and finds a guy that Harry has to kiss. Yea. Thats it.

I can't think this fic seriously. So giving a serious feedback is impossible. But this was still good, really really good. The storytelling went forward even when there was so much background stuff to be told. And it went forward when those two bakas kissed and it went forward even after that.

And there was humor. Good humor. Not that cliche stupid humor that is forced. This was the humor that I think is the hardest humor to write and so its the best one. It was good. Really good. I'm so gonna read this again. Ha.

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