Moving [Sherlock, Johnlock, Watson/Mary, NC-17]

Moving by AlessNox

John tells Sherlock that he is moving out of the apartment. Sherlock decides that he would do anything to make him stay, even if it means having sex. A post-Reichenbach Sherlock / John story with humor, dirty tricks, and true love. Warning: Strong emotions

I wouldnt normally even open this fic. Before I even read the fics title or its summary I check the amount of comment it has gotten and I read if it has more than 10 comments per chapter. But this one. This had 48 comments and 15 chapters so this should have 150 comments. Why I even opened this? No idea but I'm happy I did.

Anyways Moving tells a story where John has to choose between Sherlock and Mary. Everything starts with a conversation how John is moving out and how Sherlocks starts planning how to keep John with him. Then Mary sees how she has to fight to have John all to herself. And in the end there is this feeling that John didnt choose anyways. He did but at the same time he kinda didnt.... So not gonna tell more specifillacy.

But the things I liked was how Sherlock was so Sherlock. All his lines felt like they were straight from that tv series. Getting Sherlock to remind more of himself would be almost impossible in this kinda fic. Really. And I really appreciate that. It awesome thing.

And then there was Mycroft and how he tried to keep his brothers heart safe. We cant forgot the little Mycroft/Watson thing there somewhere (it was so small and "innocent" that it isnt one actual paring in this one so I didnt mention it there). It was almost hilarious. Those two just shouldnt do anything.

Ou. And Mary. She was lovely and I really liked how okey she was with the boys' relationship. She wasnt bothered about it or wasnt bitchy or anything. She understood that these two have a weird bond and thats it. Now it sounds really stupid but it was good and I liked her. Maybe she was a little bit too nice but I think she was perfect to Watson in this fic (with Sherlock, Watson needs both of them).

There was also this one thing I wanted to quete. Its long and its kinda meanless but I thought it describes perfectly Sherlocks and what he thinks about Watson. And I fell in love with it, so yea : D But because its so long I'm not gonna show it on main page in my blog. Yea. But this fic is totally worth of your time.

Bill Kaulitz and the Chocolate Factory [Tokio Hotel, TB, PG]

Bill Kaulitz and the Chocolate Factory by Kishmet

The Kaulitz Candy Company hasn't opened its doors to visitors in decades... but Bill Kaulitz, its young proprietor, is about to change that with five highly coveted golden tickets. These tickets might also change Tom's Trumper's life in ways neither Tom nor Bill expected.

Ou god. I love Kishmet's fics. She is such a good author and really writes so well I can't do nothing but love the fics she has made. Really.

And this one is kinda copy of that story where that poor boy finds a golden ticket and gets a tour to the candy factory. But this one doesnt quite follow the same plot. This kinda happens 200 years or something later (cant really remember but something like that) and Bill is the head of the chocolate company. And he invites five new people there and shows the factory to them.

I'm still not gonna spoil the fun and tell you everything about the tour in that factory or anything. The only thing I wanna say is that nothing is as you think it is in this fic. Well ofc Tom and Bill's relationship is but thats just how it has to be. XD

Anyways I really, really liked how Bill was so antisocial with everything and how he really didnt know much about the modern world. He lived in this old kinda world but he was still the romantic Bill that is the real Bill. Yea.

And Tom.. Okey. Maybe Tom was little bit ooc but that didnt matter. He was still Tom and did things for Bill and tried to make everything okey for Bill and so on. The other characters... First I didn't like David Jost but in the end he was good guy after all and I really liked him. Gustav and Georg.. Well I liked them and all. There wasnt really enough to really say something about them but I still liked them.

Then I liked the plot. It wasnt the same as the ordinary story. It was different but there were some things that were kinda the same. The most I liked was how it was all different but at the same time it was the same. I cant really explain it, you would have to read it to understand. It just was so Kishmet thing to do and she made it so well and I fell in love.

Yea. Totally worth for reading. Its not even long. There is only five chapters so go and read it.

Do You Need Someone Or Do You Need Me? [Sherlock, Sherlock/Watson, PWP, NC-17]

Do You Need Someone Or Do You Need Me? by RemyDico5

Sherlock was not in love with John Watson. They were friends, the very best of friends and nothing more. Just because John smelled ridiculously good was no reason to believe it was otherwise.

Ou god. First Sherlock fic I have ever read. Really. And I dont really know if I should laugh or cry. This is.... weird, odd, strange or something. This whole fic. And I thought I just opened one normal fic with some plot and normal characters. But this is something entirely different.

Watson is on heat (or something) and Sherlock is jealous. John has to stay home for a week because he is on heat and Sherlock gets lonely and he cant think anything else than Watson. yea. And I so dont know should I say Watson or John but I think I'm gonna stick with Watson.

And all I got right now is a question "what the fuck did I just read?" This was really really interesting. I dont even know if I liked this or not. Well this was well written and all that shit but the plot and that heat thing and that Watson was able to get pregnant and the pill... And did I forget something? Dont know, dont care. You got the point.

Okey. The thing I learned was that I like these two and their relationship. I'm so going to read more of these two and maybe I'm gonna find a fic that I at least understand and like (not saying i dont like this) and maybe I can say more about the next one. Yea. And please, if you have one good Sherlock/Watson fic in your mind please comment its URL. I would really appreciate that.

Conditional Reflex [Death Note, Mello/Matt, NC-17]

Conditional Reflex by MsMattJeevas

Matt is finally back with Mello but he's ignoring him. However, it seems that Mello's childhood experiment, based off Pavlov's dogs, can get Matt's attention directed at him with a mere whistle. MXM AND ALL COMPLETELY SMEXY LEMON!

I have this feeling that this fic can never get old. Really. This has been awesome everytime I have read this and I think this is gonna stay awesome forever. Yea.

And there isnt an actual plot but this isnt a PWP fic either because this isnt just sex. But Mello tries his own examine to Matt. He started it before he left the Wammy's and he continues where he left when he and Matt reunite. The whole thing is Mello giving Matt a hard on only with a whistle. Yea. And its working in this one. I'm not kidding.

This is awesome cuz... Well you have to read to find out why, no way in hell I'm gonna tell you why. I like this a lot and I have read this way too many times and I'm still gonna read this again and again and if there is one reason why to read this is that I love this and I have read this more than twice because I just don't do that so often.

What else? Ou. The boys arent really ooc or anything. They are good written and everything works. So yea. Ou god. This was useless update but right now I don't give a shit. Read this and be happy that you read this. Yea. Thats it.

No Hablo Espinacas [Death Note, Mello/Matt, NC-17]

No Hablo Espinacas by Dlvvanzor

Matt wasn't entirely sure how he and Mello ended up stripping, getting deported to Mexico, and landing themselves in Mexican prison, but he was pretty sure that it still counted as FINALLY getting Mello to take him on an actual date. MxM oneshot.

First of all this fic is something I have read way too many times. Like really. And the bad thing about that is that I don't even like the whole fic. I don't like the humor and I don't like the scenes. The only thing I like is Near in the end. He is so lovely, ha.

But yea. So. These two goes to date for the first time and they want to do it really classy way. But then somehow they are forced to be strippers in that restaurant. And then ofc cops hit there and arrest every illegel employee there and you can guess what happens to Mello and Matt. And then just happens more stupid stuff. Yea.

But the thing why I don't like this is because the humor is so forced. I think this would be awesome if the story would have been told seriously and not comic way. At least then I would liked the humor and maybe even laughed.

Still I liked Near and his comment in the end. It was so good that someone said something to Mello and didn't do like he told to do. It was awesome. I have to take a quete from it.

You gave my dominos to the dog I talked Mr. Wammy into giving me. You got this dog so drunk that it threw up on my carpet. You told Mr. Wammy that the dog kept throwing up everywhere and he took it away.

So ou yea the best part of the fic. Still doesn't make it enough for me to do read over and over again. I don't even know why I have read this so many times. Maybe cuz I don't remember reading this when I'm looking for fics... Well maybe.

The Bet [Harry Potter, HD, Ron/Herm]

The Bet by BregoMelloNin

Harry cannot seem to find the right girl, so Hermione takes the matter into her own hands. After further unsuccessful dating, Hermione gets suspicious and she extends a bet. Maybe what Harry needs isn't a girl at all and she intends to find out

Ou god this was good. Really good. And Harry was just way too innocent until in the end where there was a new Harry. God. Yea.

Anyways. So Harry losts a bet to Hermione. He was suppose to go out with a girl and kiss that girl and like that kiss. But yea, you know Harry, he is just way too gay for Draco to do that. So he kisses the girl but didnt really enjoy it so Hermione drags Harry to club and finds a guy that Harry has to kiss. Yea. Thats it.

I can't think this fic seriously. So giving a serious feedback is impossible. But this was still good, really really good. The storytelling went forward even when there was so much background stuff to be told. And it went forward when those two bakas kissed and it went forward even after that.

And there was humor. Good humor. Not that cliche stupid humor that is forced. This was the humor that I think is the hardest humor to write and so its the best one. It was good. Really good. I'm so gonna read this again. Ha.

Vaan minä en ole kala [Harry Potter, HD, Ron/Herm, death, suomi]

Vaan minä en ole kala by Tala Sohalia

Sota on jättänyt jälkensä heihin kaikkiin. Harryn ja Dracon tulee löytää itsensä ennen kuin he voivat löytää toisensa.

Tää on jotain uskomattominta, mitä oon varmaan ikinä lukenu. Sillon ku ekaa kertaa luin tätä niin olin ihan helvetin moises taivaas ja rakastin jokaista sanaa ja pystyin vaa ajattelemaa et kuin hyvin ja hienosti tää on kirjotettu, enkä oikeestaa mitään negatiivista. Ei sen negatiivisen löytäminen vieläkään ole mitenkään helppoa, mutta oon mä täältä jo pari asiaa löytäny nyt kolmannen lukukerran jälkeen. Ja täs tais olla viel jotain muita parituksia, mutta musta noi tuntuu nyt kaikkein tärkeimmiltä, enkä muista muita. Ha.

Mutta siis. Ensimmäisessä osassa Harry on ollut kadoksissa sodan jälkeen kauan (en muista tarkkaan, koska tässä nyt on paljon yksityiskohtia), mutta tarpeeks kauan, jotta monet on yrittäny löytää sitä ja jäljittäny ja viimein Draco lähetetää perään ja Harry luovuttaa ja palaa ystäviensä luokse. Ja siitä alkaa pitäkä toipuminen sodasta ja vastaavasta, mitä ei kyllä hirveen tarkasti kerrota muuta kuin Dracon osuudesta. Ja tietysti samalla alkaa Harryn ja Dracon kaoottinen suhde, joka päätyy Harryn osalta sairaalaan ja Dracon osalta eräänlaiselle hullujenhuoneelle, josta alkaakin sitten toinen osa.

Toka osa on kokonaan Dracon ajasta Keitaalla ja kolmas osa on miten nää kaks palaa yhteen kun kumpikin on selvinny ja löytäny oman elämänsä suunnan ja niitten tiet kohtaa. Ja kaikki tää tuntuu niin tarkkaan mietityltä ja suunniteltulta. Ja tietysti lopetus on nätti ja mun lemppariosio koko ficissä, vaikka se saaki mut aina itkemään. Ha. Mut kaiken kaikkiaan täs on 45 lukua plus epilogi. Joo.

Anyways. Vaan minä en ole kalassa kaikkein parasta on miten kaikki on tarkkaan harkittu ja miten kaikilla on jokin looginen päätelmä, eikä mikään vaa mee sen takii et nyt kirjottajan tekikin mieli kirjottaa näin. Varmana tää on muuttunu ficcarin mielialojen mukaan, mut tää ei tunnu siltä, et yhtäkkii tulee joku suuri muutos johonkin, kaukana siitä.

Erityisesti Harryn tuntemukset ja ajatukset ja motiivit sopii ihan törkeen hyvin tähän ficiin. Se tuntu sopivan sekä itse alkuperäiseen Harryyn, että just tossa tilanteessa elävälle henkilölle ois sopinu. Dracosta en ihan pysty sanomaan samaa. Toisaalta mä ymärrän, että miten se muutos tuli sieltä ja miten siihen muutokseen päästiin ja mä ymmärrän että mistä se ekassa osiossa oleva Draco tuli, mutta silti se ei oo ihan niin hyvä kuin Harry.

Ja sitten noitten kahden lapsi. Joo. Sen tarinan saatte lukea lukemalla koko ficin, mutta mä tykkäsin siitä koko ideasta, että ne saa muksun. Ja tää ei oo sellanen tyhmä mpreg juttu, ku mpreg ficit yleensä on. Tässä on kunnon selitys, että miten se tapahtui ja että sillä ihan oikeesti oli vaikutustu Harryyn aikana ja jälkeen. Ja oikeestaa yks kolmasosa täst ficist keskittyy siihen jälkeen raskauden osioon. Mutta ei siitä enempää. Piti vain sanoa, että tässä on loogisuutta, eikä takerruta sellaisiin pieniin yksityiskohtiin ja liikakerrontaa asiasta, jolloin se koko fiilis pysyy hyvänä ja koko mpreg osio pysyy hyvänä.

Kuitenkin. Koska mä löydän ficeistä melkein aina yhden tai kahden hieman häiritsevän osuuden, löysin mä nyt tästäkin. Valitettavasti se on ehdottomasti repliikkien kökköys. Tähän koko ficciin olis ihan satavarmana saanu varmaan miljoona ihan helvetin upeeta dialogia ja hienoa, syvällistä keskustelua. Kuitenkin mun mielestä nää jää vähän vajaiks ja tönköiks, nää ei kuullosta sellaselta sujuvalta puheelta, mitä vois kuulla ihan puhuvien ihmisten suusta. En nyt lähe ettimään mitään tiettyä kohtaan, otin vain ekan mikä tuli vastaan.

"Edelleen sama itserakas kusipää, Malfoy?"

"Edelleen täynnä omaa ylemmyyttäsi, Potter?"

"Ei tarvita paljoa, että on ylempänä kuin sinä”, Harry sihahti inhoten.

"Siitäkin huolimatta, että minä kannan vastuuta seurauksista, jotka sinä aiheutit?"

En mä tiedä. Ehkä joku ajattelee, et toi ihan hirveen hyvää ja sujuvaa keskustelua, mut en mä tiiä. Okei. Ehkä mun on pakko myös myöntää, et mun on vaikee löytää hienoa ja sujuvaa keskustelua, josta tykkäsisin ite ja se tuntuis hyvältä (sellasia kyllä on, mutta aika harvassa).

Äh. Kuitenkin. Tää todellakin on lukemisen arvoinen ja tunteita herättävä. Yksinkertaisesti yksi parhaimmistoa suomenkielisistä ficeistä, joita oon koskaan lukenu.

Diagnosis: Heartbroken [Tokio Hotel, TB, NC-17]

Diagnosis: Heartbroken by Ainee

Feeling ill, Bill turns to his friend Doctor Schäfer for help. He is surprised to be diagnosed with heartache and even more so when he realises exactly who's causing it.

I don't like this fic. Well I liked the first chapter and that was the only reason why I even read this. But the other four chapters arents so good. It kinda feels like the writer didnt give as much attention or thought to the others like they did for the first one.

But it all starts with Bill sitting in kitchen and talkin to Gustav about how he is not feeling to great and Gustav comes to conclusion that Bill is in love with his brother. Gustav meant all that as a joke but Bill took it seriously and realized that he is in love with Tom. After that twin's realationship goes to downfall because Bill doesnt want Tom to know. But in the end they figures everything out and the fic ends with Bill talking to Gustav again.

Well the plot is good and I like it. It doesnt just jump from this thing to another and it has reasons why everything goes like they are suppose to. But then come these little things, like when Tom found out how Bill is in love with him and how after a few minutes he has way too big urge to kiss his brother and that totally comes out of nowhere. Ofc after that there was comment from Tom's point of view about how it all was new to him and he hadnt thought any of it before. But those little things afterwards doesnt really help when it happens just after he disvered something and its like "He likes me and ou my god I like him too even when I didnt know it a minute ago", no, it just doesnt sound good.

And then they just starts going monology in their heads without any reasoning and tries to figure out how it all can be possible... Okey other fics have this too and I still like them but it just doesnt fit in this one. It feels like everything has to have an explantion right away and it cant wait until the scene is over. It doesnt feel right that first you think kissing someone first time ever and at the same time you start thinking how you got that point. No. It doesn't work that way.

Okey, I don't wanna just diss this fic, I wanted to say something good about this one. The hard part right now is to find the good in this one that isnt the way too awesome first chapter where everything is so funny and good and well written and so on. It is masterpiece if you compare it to the rest. I really, really liked it and then I read it over a couple of times just because there was enough humor to keep it light but at the same time there was deep thinking and other good things.

And just because of that first chapter I read this again today. And now I like this even less but I like the first chapter even more. Sounds stupids and it is stupid but whatever. At least the writer can write they just didnt have energy to write the whole fic with the same quality. But well, this is just my opinion and someone else could think it all is friggin masterpiece but whatever.

Rough [Tokio Hotel, TB, NC-17, violence,drugs]

Rough by mohanrocks

Sometimes, people meet once and for no reason at all.
Other times, the purpose has just yet to be found out.
It can be an easy passing, or it could get rough.

Fight Club kinda fic. Never thought I would find one that is as good as this one. Well this isnt actually Fight Club thing but this has fighting and its not because of gang its more like these people like it and such. But I think this is the closest thing to Fight Club kinda fic I'm ever gonna find and really like. Yea.

But the plot basically is how Tom fights for money and they have this little group that together tries to earn money via figthing. Somehow Bill gets in the middle of that crazy life. And he becomes one the street fighters, like they call those people in this fic. He somehow also does it with his school and puts those two things together. So he does some school thing about street fighter and criminal psychology. Yea.

This is still in progress, so I really don't know how deep the plot is or what is gonna happen in this fic in the future. But that is the plot so far and I like it.

Maybe the best part in this fic are all the characters. I like Bill and how he is trying to figure everyone out in this one and the same time he is trying to figure himself out. All the time he finds new things about himself, things that he didnt think there would be. Like the fighting. Bill didnt first think it would give such a rush.

And then is Tom that is seen from Bill's point of view. Tom is a big mystery in this one. Bill can't figure him or his thoughts out so the reader cant do that either. Its fun to try understand Tom and the reasons why he does anything.

Ofc there is alos Bushido who runs everything and gets Bill middle of that all. And Jost who is Bill's teacher. We can't forget Georg or Gustav or Natalie. There hasnt been much about them yet but waiting that.

Anyways. The other reason why I like this is how well this is written and everything comes so smoothly and like everything just comes without any force like the fic lives its own life. Well. This isnt that kinda fic I would normally like to read because all the violence but the plot behind that violence is so good it keeps me hooked. Yea. I just like this way too much.

Anthem [Tokio Hotel, TB]

Anthem by Ema21

Bill is having trouble admitting that he's in love. Tom, on the other hand, seems to be doing just fine. 

This is fic that doesnt really is long enough for long ranting. But after I read this, I thought that this atleast needs a little spot in my blog. Even when I'm just gonna but this here and say only a couple words.

Basically Anthem is only beautiful storytelling where everything is told really slowly and one thing at the time. And it has mostly Bill's toughts and how he saw what Tom did. Its deep in a really beautiful way and doesn't really have any plot, kinda. The plot is Bill figuring out the world and his relationship with Tom and thats it. Not complex, no hard feelings, nothing unnecessary.

But I just liked how simple and short and beautiful this was. There wasnt any stupid drama or any broken hearts. There was only two guys who love each other and the other one tries to find his place in the world. Yea.

It all was just so beautiful and felt like it all could broke any minute. Maybe breathtaking would be good word, I dont know, you tell me.

L'Amour Looks Something Like You [Death Note, Mello/Matt, NC-17]

L'Amour Looks Something Like You by xxbeyondxbirthdayxx

 Paris under the snow, in winter. Mail didn't expect to be abducted after work. Neither did he expect his abductor to be a Mafia boss his age, clueless, scared, and in love. Even less did he expect to be released. So why coming back? A bedtime fairytale...

Ou god. Mello in this one was so un-Mello but in the end he was so Mello and... I dont know. But I wouldn't say this is a bedtime fairytale. To me this was just one fic without that yaoi part and with a good plot. Yea.

But everything starts with Mello kidnapping Matt so he could get to know Matt. But ofc Matt doesnt like that so much and is a little bit too hard on Mello. Everything starts to go little better after a couple accidents and Matt finally kinda gives in on Mello but fucks that but with lieing and yea. Not gonna spoil the whole fic.

Like I said in the beging I didn't like Mello in this one. He was way too ooc even when it all was explained in the end, it just didnt fit well in my mind. Mello isnt some shy guy who cant ask someone out to date or cant just walk in that store and talk. Mello just does things with his own arrogance. It was all explained in the end but it still doesnt change anything.

But Matt was like Matt in this fic. He was game addicted and didnt have so much ooc things in his character. His background was good too and so. Maybe I didnt understand his reasons to go back to talk to Mello so much but I don't have to understand everything.

The ending was good without that yaoi part. It would have destroyed to me if it had had the yaoi. But to me it came I a little too soon. I would have liked their relationship to have a little bit more time to develop. Now it felt little bit way too light and not so deep than it could have been if they had know each other a more than week.

Anyways. The thing I really liked was at the begining. Whole description and how it was full of holes and how it didnt tell you much even when it really was telling you a lot of things. It was just so beautiful and nice.

He had wandered in there, a small line of shops around one of the city's railway stations, to escape a diluvian rain tearing the sky all of a sudden, as he was walking the streets aimlessly, just for the sake of being outside, for once.
He had waited for the sky to clear, or the rain to at least lessen a bit so it wouldn't be stinging his face, helped by the cold January wind.

Its shame that the writer couldnt keep the same style for the whole fic. It would have brought so much mystery and exciting to the fic and made it more extraordinary. It is really a shame. Still the fic was good and all it would have been just so much better with that style. Yea.

Dreams Aren't Real [Naruto, SasuNaru, NC-17]

Dreams Aren't Real by Dashel

Naruto is dreaming about Sasuke every night. Is this a chance to make peace with his old friend before the end or something else entirely?

This fic has so many things you can guess before they happen but still doesnt ruin the fic, at least, it didnt ruin it for me. It was fun and somehow those things still had some surprises with them. And ofc there are also lots of things you couldnt have guessed before.

But the plot is pretty simple. Naruto is dreaming about Sasuke and those dreams starts to affect to his life a little bit. First they are these innocent ones where he tries to catch Sasuke but after awhile they start to talk and develops a new bond. The dreams chance everytime their relationship chances and then everything chances all over again when Naruto cant stop dreaming or when Naruto finds out that dream-Sasuke is the real Sasuke. And everything feels just right.

Dreams Aren't Real actually has three parts in it that together have those 15 chapters. Its logical when I new part starts always and blahblahblah. But I liked that decision very much. It kinda gave the fic a rythm and everything went with those three parts.

Anyways... I have nothing to say about this fic XD No really. I don't know what to say. I read this about a week ago and havent figured what to say. This isnt cliche which is awesome thing and I really like about that but other than that I have no idea.

This is or isnt one of those fics that just takes you and you cant stop reading. I liked to read this but I didnt really fell in love with this. But this still is good and totally worth for reading and maybe I'm gonna read this again. Okey, there was one part I really fell in love with and it was the ending. I couldnt guess it beforehand it all came to me in litte pieces and that hold it together and made it good to me.

I also loved Itachi's part in this one. How he still was so important in Sasuke's life even when Sasuke had killed him before. And this really felt so natural in that ninja world that no character wasn't even ooc. Dreams Aren't Real doesn't really have any bad sides and maybe thats the reason I don't know what to say about this. It just has to read and figure out on your own. Yea.

Seaweed [Death Note, Mello/Matt, NC-17, death]

Seaweed by xxbeyondxbirthdayxx

Near's entertaining the lie, keeping Matt working for him, with the belief that Mello's dead. Mello, shadow of himself, thinking that Matt's dead too, suddenly takes revenge on Near just to numb the pain... and finds Matt in a condition he didn't expect.

I thought I had read all good MelloxMatt fics but I found one more. And yea. I just love those two genious and their games and chocolate and mafia and cigarets... I just love everythin about them because they have all the things I would love to have on my own characters. Yea.

Still this Seaweed. I don't really understand how that name has something to do with this fic but maybe it doesnt matter. Kira has died and Mello somehow survived from his death in that car (and it wasnt some stupid explanation, it was good) and then Matt has survived from all those bullets. But they both think the other is dead and their life is way too hollow until Mello decides to kill Near and tracks him down. In the end he doesnt kill Near but finds Matt and then the happy part starts. Okey. Near's destiny isn't so happy and so but yea.

There was lots of description that I fell in love with. I'm not gonna quote one cuz I read this on my phone and I'm too lazy to write the things here or find it via laptop. So anyways. There was some so raw things and how the writer didnt even try to make things little bit beautiful or nice. The things are written like they are and not changed to anything.

And then how they all made choices that affected to them and how their past affected to everything. Then all that together. Well this wasnt one perfectly written, really good quality piece but this was good in a way of imperfect way. But Seaweed wasnt bad still, the not so perfect things made it better and that way got more feeling in there. Yea.

But so fell in love with this that I don't even know what to say. Maybe I'm gonna go and read more fics from this writer. Yea.

After The World Fell Down [Naruto, SasuNaru, NC-17, violence]

After The World Fell Down by Zephyras

Naruto has been fighting a war for the life of his neighborhood for the past four years, with no end in sight. His world is violent, arbitrary, and ruthless, but it is simple. It makes sense. And then Uchiha Sasuke screws everything up. AU, Modern. 2010 SN EXCHANGE FIC.

I didn't have any ideas about this fic when I started to read it. First I was kinda disapointed but after awhile I really started to like this. The weird thing is why I started to like this so suddenly but to me it doesn't really matter at all. It's a fic and  I liked it and thats the most important thing.

But the plot basically is Naruto and his friends trying to get rid of the yakuza that has come to their town. They have been fighting a long time and hadnt really gotten any further with anything. But then yakuza (Orochimaru) hires a new guy and this new guy is better fighter than the earlier people and things start to change. Ofc this new guy is Sasuke and he and Naruto are always fighting and then there is this this kiss.. And you can guess the rest.

Okey. I really liked how this was written how good it was and how it there was only the main thing and the fightin wasnt so over portrayed. Everything had limits. Then the characters werent some miracle guys who can survive from anything. They got bruises, they went to hospital because of the bruises and they died.

I also liked how everything affected to everything. How Naruto missed his friedns who had died and how they were still part of his everyday life. It felt real and got under your skin. Then came Sasuke's influence and that really affected to Naruto even when they didnt do so much but you could still see it there under almost every sentence.

What I didnt like was the ending, okey how they got out new life and such was good but it everything was so easy. Everything went so smoothly like there wasnt happening anything. One minute they were dieing and the next minute they were dancing and partying. It all felt too easy and felt like there werent any consequenses with their "new life". I don't know how to explain it to you without telling the whole ending, but I think you get it when you have read it.

Ou yea. I know this has... what 33 000 words (?) and its still an oneshot but so what? Its good and totally worth for reading. Well if you have enough time to read that long oneshot : DD

Talk To Me [Tokio Hotel, TB, NC-17]

Talk To Me by cynical_terror

Tom drunk dials the girl of his dreams. Or does he? What sort of kooky shenanigans will our hero get up to this week? Click the cut to find out!

First of all cynical_terros is one of my favorite TB writers of all time, like really. She really knows how to write and everything she has written has always been way too awesome. And if I'm being completely honest I have to admit that I have read her every single one fic that I have found, like really. Everyone. And most of them twice. And thats true.

But anyways. Talk To Me. Bill is way too horny and hadn't gotten laid over five months. And then Andreas gets distracted so he can't help Bill and Tom calls a drunk call to Bill which doesn't really help anything. And because that call Bill starts to think, really think about Tom. They don't really talk and everything is messed up so Tom tries to fix things but everything doesn't go entirely how they were suppose to go. And then TB happens.

Ou yea. Okey. This is good and normal cynical_terror guality. But mostly I fell in love with how frustrated Bill is in this fic. His every thought and action shows all his feelings so well and you can see so well how he just wants to hit his head againts the wall.

And then there is Tom, the perfect brother who only wants to help. Tom is also so innocent in this one. He isnt sex god or anything like that, he is normal teenage boy who doesnt really know how to pic up girls or how to act with girls. That is just one more thing to fall in love with.

Ah. Of course We can't forget Gustav. I don't even know the right word to describle how oblivious Gustav is about Bill and Andrea's realationship. Gustav gives also a little bit humor to this fic. Well if the humor Tom gives isnt enough. Ha.

Anyways. Totally worth for reading. Ha.